Adaption of the Storyboard

Once we had all the footage in the correct order we found that the sequence did not work as well as we planned. The scenes including the victim being punched and killed made the story line unclear to the audience. It was hard to portray how the victim linked into the main character's life.

We attempted having a match on action shot in two of the shots. One was in the child scene, where he walks down the alley. We wanted to show him from the front and then the back. This made the sequence of him walking too long of just one element, therefore boring and less entertaining for the audience. The second shot was where our main character goes to punch a punchbag and the match on action shot shows him punching the victim. We had to take this out due to the confusion in the storyboard, also it was difficult to make it flow seamlessly with the resources we had available.

We decided to have all the child scenes next to each other because we wanted a certain part of the voiceover to play alongside it. This part of the voiceover makes it clear to the audience that the child is our main character in the past.